Monday, March 25, 2019
Friday, March 15, 2019
final Exam Preview
1. I have done youtube videos before with some friends and I have experience of filming on a camera and doing videos on a phone on certain types of apps.
2. I think it will be a lot of fun and I think it will be a challenge figuring everything but Im up for it.
3. I feel like I could do this over vacation of a day for me, or a day of learning a dance, or a soccer game.
4. I can take images of me doing something or having me have few moments of me looking at the camera or posing for the camera.
5. I would have an overlay of what im doing during the day and explain what im doing. Or I would put music in the back ground.
SLO Practice
Wednesday, March 13, 2019
opinion Essay, Academic Purposes
Academic Purposes Campbell Hardy
At Bowie High School and in any other school, grades are very important even though you may not think it, it is. Kids everyday take test,quizzes,homework assignments, and projects these things can be like half of your grade and could cost you of failing if you don't get a good grade. Personally i think it's really hard if some kids get good grades and some don't and they are bragging and telling of what they got and comparing themselves based on good grades or not.
In my opinion, I think we should have a policy if you share your grades with others. Other than people you were working on a project together should not share their grades with others if it was good or bad in school.
It is really hard on students if they have to deal with others feeling power over them if they get a better grade. I feel like this should be installed because i have felt this way before and comparing myself to others even though we have a different teacher, and are different academic wise.
As we see, i get that some kids get super excited about getting a good grade and want to tell someone just to tell it, but it should not be for the reason to rub it in someone else's face. It should be to show your parents and have an accomplishment of your life that your proud of yourself besides how many people know or see what you have got or done.
Another thing is that some kids want to go to harvard and go and do other things and achieve so many things in life, but you have to remember to be a kind person. Being a good friend and person is more important than any grade you ever get.
I feel like for me i get pretty good grades in school and i feel good about them and once in awhile i will say what i got on a test and be proud of myself but i never try to brag about everything i get. In our school everyone is so competitive in academic wise,sports, how much money you have and it should be contained.
Researchers say more than half of school are competitive with each other, especially our school. I get that kids have to be competitive with others and they want to win, but when they rub in their face should not be prohibited.
I think this should come to an end and not have kids bragging about what they got on a grade, having kind people at school and having it be less competitive in a lot of things.
Personal Essay
1. Something that I can use for my essay is, my topic is strong and passionate about what I'm writing about. Also having the people reading this feel something and know what im feeling about this, and also understand where im coming from.
2. One thing to have in my essay is to support my topic and what the sactives are to my topic.
3. Some things that will help me in my essay are to
-watch my construction. If every sentence begins “I”, I need to rephrase to provide a better rhythm and pace to what im writing.
-No extra points for the number of facts you include. Academic essays contain more facts than opinion, personal essays contain more opinion than facts. But ensure the facts you use are accurate.
-. If you’re writing about a global theme (poverty, unemployment, child abuse) bring the subject closer to home by relating it to specific, individual examples.
2. One thing to have in my essay is to support my topic and what the sactives are to my topic.
3. Some things that will help me in my essay are to
-watch my construction. If every sentence begins “I”, I need to rephrase to provide a better rhythm and pace to what im writing.
-No extra points for the number of facts you include. Academic essays contain more facts than opinion, personal essays contain more opinion than facts. But ensure the facts you use are accurate.
-. If you’re writing about a global theme (poverty, unemployment, child abuse) bring the subject closer to home by relating it to specific, individual examples.
Wednesday, March 6, 2019
Nut Graf
A nut graph is a paragraph that explains the context of the story. The term is also spelled as nut graf, nut 'graph, nutgraph, nutgraf. It is a contraction of the expression nutshell paragraph. In most news stories, the essential facts of a story are included in the lede, the first sentence or two of the story. Good leades try to answer who, what, when, where, why, and how as quickly as possible. The nut graf, which often will start in the third, fourth, or fifth paragraph, will explain any additional context for why the story is important.
Nut grafs are sometimes not all 5ws are included in your news leads, or what you write might not explain the importance of the story, so you need a nut Graf to explain it in, well, a nut shell.Nut grafs can be longer than one paragraph. Not all stories need nut grafs but it is frequently required or suggested in featured stories that don't definitive when, where, who, or why.
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